It is true that modern children are more independent in comparison with their peers in the past. In my opinion, this trend has own benefits as well as drawbacks.
Giving more independence to children their parents may lead with idea that a child should has the same rights as adult. They may argue that having privilege to make their own choices children learn how to make their own decisions and it helps them to be ready for their future lives. For instance, my parents used to give me some amount of money every month and I had learned how to manage my budget properly as I was given the freedom to spend that money by my own. Thus, younger generation nowadays is going to be more open-minded and independent than previous generations because they are given enough freedom to choose their own way of life.
However, too much indulgence to child’s desires may lead to number of negative consequences. First, those children who do whatever they want may grow-up as spoilt brat without any respect toward the elderly. In addition, without enough parent’s observation and lack of control they may fall under the bad influence. For instance, one of my classmates became drug addicted starting from smoking and drinking with local teen band. Unfortunately, his parents missed the fact that he was communicating with them and learning illegal stuff. Therefore, it is obvious that adults should control their children behavior and set boundaries, which should not be crossed.
In conclusion, I believe that giving freedom to children parents should remember about the balance, the youngsters should have just enough space to make their own decisions, meanwhile certain boundaries, and rules should be never crossed.
- Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them What are the problems related to this What are some possible solutions 83
- The handwriting has become less formal and it is done in a more relaxing way now than in the past What are the causes There are more advantages or disadvantages 71
- More and more developing countries are expanding their tourist industries. Why is this? Is it a positive development? 67
- Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced What are the reasons for this Is this a positive or negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... may lead with idea that a child should has the same rights as adult. They may argu...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies, and rules should be never crossed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0985915493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67836260888 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7056116833 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135553664207 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491874191337 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382788092995 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896694224261 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323048344912 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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