Many people nowadays tend to marry and have children in their thirties rather than at a younger age.
Is this a positive or negative development?
There is a tendency in many countries around the globe to get married and have children after getting thirty years old in comparison with the past when people used to change their marital status at a rather young age. In my opinion, this trend can be considered as a positive one and I will explain my opinion in the essay below.
Despite the fact that some individuals might argue that women of the younger age are more healthy and fit for conceiving a child, mature women are better prepared for the mother role psychologically and surprisingly might be in a better physical shape than the youth. This is because, after their thirties, women are planning to have a child and try to do everything to stay in good physical and mental health. While a large number of young females tend to conceive children at the moment of a celebration drinking alcohol and smoking, which is definitely harmful to a child.
Secondly, becoming a mother in later years means that a person already received education and has built a professional career. Thus, it is obvious that this kind of woman is completely ready to provide the best upbringing for her child. Meanwhile, being a mother in their twenties might be significantly difficult because they forced to choose between a career and being a stay-at-home mom. In the worst-case scenario, they maintain both motherhood and struggle to survive and the money.
In conclusion, I think that the latest trend to create a family after thirties is beneficial both for a child and for a mother because women at this age still being rather healthy and fit are more stable in terms of finances and career.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: years'; year's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81272084806 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66314846559 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7430713183 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.2 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24250714631 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788973916002 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765454006581 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141952220445 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079430025657 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.