More people are spending their free time watching movies, why is this? Is it a good or bad?
Large proportions of people are spending their leisure time watching movies and this trend is incessantly increasing. The main reason for this trend is due to people's consideration that watching movies as a pleasure activity and are opting to watch them whenever they have some time. However, this is not a good phenomenon and would have negative repercussions if they are addicted to it.
In general, pupils consider watching movies as a goto-activity, either alone or with family, especially when they have some free time. It is considered as a stress reliever by most salaried individuals belonging to developing countries. For example, In India, watching movies is regarded as a pleasurable activity in weekends which act as a relaxation medium from all the stress developed in workforce over weekdays. Hence, watching movies serve as a great fun time activity which would help people get rid of work pressure.
Despite the reasons stated above, spending time watching movies is just a mere waste of precious time which can rather be spent learning an artistic skill. In addition, watching movies is part of a sedentary lifestyle as it has no physical activity involved. Moreover, continuos and prolonged habit to watch movies would turn into an addiction which would be insurmountable to control if not taken care.
In conclusion, the rise in the number of people watching movies is because of their consideration it as a pleasure activity in their free time. However, time spent doing so is just a waste of their valuable time which can be spent doing something productive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86299619561 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.792306131 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293110188355 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122970102584 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940204394675 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198170469395 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806562685698 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.