You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off from your work to complete it.
Dear Mr Marsh,
I am writing to seek your approval to take 10 days off work in order to complete my term final and thesis paper for my MBA course. I am hoping that you would allow me to take the time off work from 8th November 2019 to 17th November 2019.
I am pursuing my MBA degree from Edinburgh University and to complete it, I need to submit my thesis paper by 15th November and take a few exams. I have 10 days paid annual leaves and I have saved those for my term final. Now I am hoping to use those leaves and finish my MBA.
Despite my leave from office, I will check my emails daily, respond to important ones and be available for emergency phone calls. Besides, I have already talked to James and he is ready to take a few important responsibilities of mine in the meantime. Once I get back to the office, I would endeavour to come earlier than usual and work on weekends, if needed, in order to catch up on anything I had missed.
I realise my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the office but in the long run, our company will benefit from my knowledge and thesis activity which involves an empirical investigation into the impact of leadership on organisational performance. Since our company is considering a few training sessions for the team to enhance the leadership quality, my expertise could be useful.
I am looking forward to receiving your approval for the leave.
Yours sincerely,
David Ferrer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th November 2019 to 17th November 2019. I am pursuing my MBA degree from Edinbur...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ember 2019 to 17th November 2019. I am pursuing my MBA degree from Edinburg...
^
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... by 15th November and take a few exams. I have 10 days paid annual leaves and I h...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58846153846 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68392927093 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.229253883 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188405161275 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683875747219 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633060005342 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10745837959 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854147904191 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.