You need a translation of a document into a different language. you have a friend who speaks that language.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- explain what the document is and why you need a translation
- explain why is in urgent and important for you
- ask your friend if and when he/she will be able to help you
Dear Janes,
How have you been? It's been a long time since we were last in touch. I'm writing this letter to ask you a small favour of translating a product manual to English.
I recently bought a home security system from German as frequent theft incidents happened our locality.Unfortunately, the user manual along with this product was written in German and there is no English copy of it available even in the internet. Then I suddenly remember that you have a good command in German language.
It's really imperative to install a security system as I am going for a business trip for a month next week. And also, I have lots of valuable things at my home.Besides,there was also a robbery in my neighbour's house.So I need to install it at the earliest.
Could you please help me out in converting this document? It would be greatly appreciated if you could send me back the translated copy within two days.
Reply soon!
With Love,
John
- You need a translation of a document into a different language you have a friend who speaks that language Write a letter to your friend In your letter explain what the document is and why you need a translation explain why is in urgent and important for y 82
- with the increase in global warming, some may suggest that human race should move to other planets,while others might opine to take measures for the sustenance of or mother Earth. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... long time since we were last in touch. Im writing this letter to ask you a small ...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...t theft incidents happened our locality.Unfortunately, the user manual along with this produc...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rative to install a security system as I am going for a business trip for a month...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...have lots of valuable things at my home.Besides,there was also a robbery in my neighbou...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ts of valuable things at my home.Besides,there was also a robbery in my neighbours hou...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...s also a robbery in my neighbours house.So I need to install it at the earliest. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74251497006 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00746677371 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682634730539 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2307929068 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178726997769 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725197519071 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672271078507 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102593053165 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547593227482 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.