You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
To whom it may concern:
I'm writing to report a missing case about my new bank card that the bank sent to me recently. The letter I received was meant to inform me the receipt of the brand new bank card i applied two month ago. it was said that I could find the card in envelope with letter together. Firstly, i didn't see any trace of this card and the envelope didn't seem to be opened before its arrival. The disappearance of this card worries me as it could lead to a serious financial consequence if some one use it illegally without my permission. Secondly, the information stored in this card contains my sensitive personal data which would be a greater risk to my privacy.
Thus, I'm sincerely asking you to investigate this incident. And I'm wondering that is there any measures could be taken to ensure my bank account's safety before any further unexpected problem occurs.
Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
To whom it may concern: Im writing to report a missing case abou...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
To whom it may concern: Im writing to report a missing case about ...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y new bank card that the bank sent to me recently. The letter I received was mean...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the receipt of the brand new bank card i applied two month ago. it was said that...
^
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...f the brand new bank card i applied two month ago. it was said that I could find the ...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... new bank card i applied two month ago. it was said that I could find the card in ...
^^
Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...velope with letter together. Firstly, i didnt see any trace of this card and the enve...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...any trace of this card and the envelope didnt seem to be opened before its arrival. T...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance of this card worries me as it could lead to a serious financial consequence ...
^^
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...d to a serious financial consequence if some one use it illegally without my permission....
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould be a greater risk to my privacy. Thus, Im sincerely asking you to investi...
^^
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...a greater risk to my privacy. Thus, Im sincerely asking you to investigate thi...
^^
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...g you to investigate this incident. And Im wondering that is there any measures co...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any further unexpected problem occurs. Expecting to hear from you as soon as po...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hear from you as soon as possible. Jack
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from you as soon as possible. Jack
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60714285714 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57481589065 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3670200151 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279230599827 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11717032826 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840444831584 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131505159283 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705777282183 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.