Life cycle of silkworm.

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Life cycle of silkworm.

The diagram presents the cycle of life of the silkworm. At the first glance, it is evident that the evolving of silkworm into the moth is going to take several times, approximately between 8 weeks and 10 weeks.

Firstly, the moth has left its eggs in the leaf. Following this, the eggs will be stayed in leaf for some times and after that, it is going to be crack-opened in the next 10 days and turn into silkworm larva. Once it becomes larva, it is able to consume the meal from the mulberry leaf, for changing into the next level, it takes from 4 through to 6 weeks for larva to evolve its shape into the next life stage.

In accordance with the process above, larva is covered by the silk throad in order to make it protected from the predator. Before being cocoon, larva needs to wait for several days. After being cocoon, larva will be fully covered by the silk throad and it will take more times to make larva evolving into moth. Overall, it is going to take 16 days for larva to evolve into the moth.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33684210526 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10199746713 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0230243424 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132107171287 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09480043781 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201079927923 0.0843802449381 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144083530092 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154420716766 0.0819641961636 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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