Dear Mr. Baker
I am writing to you for the latest changes that are happened in my work due to changes from graphic design to content manager position. I will explain important matters that could help me adapt better.
My duties and tasks has changed much from the previous position of Graphic Designer, even though i have not completely transited into the new position. At the moment i am spending more time with analysing the content and have a better understanding about products photo shooting and videos. I have also scheduled two meeting with the team to create a better coordination within.
In addition to archiving my tasks i see very important to have a proper training of Excel which is really important to manage all the content information and to create a right summary of all the work done at the end of each month. I believe that i need at least 4 hour a week training in order to get the right skill.
Looking forward for your response to my suggestions,
Yours sincerely,
Andy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74431818182 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5997096846 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7324849587 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189009107458 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746049691985 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701755844974 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10849314892 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598409794352 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.