Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is the soul of life. People proclaim that music is a good way of connecting people of different values and even ages I totally concur with the view that music goes beyond boundaries to bond the society at various levels. This essay will explain as to why music helps build strong bonds between various multicultural as well as between people of varied ages?
First and foremost, Music is not only a stress buster, but of late it is instrumental in bringing people of various culture enjoying any and every kind of peppy numbers which seem to bring everyone on to the dance floors or it is a euphonious song pleasant to the ears. Regardless of the fact, that the language may not understood by many. Still music which is built on rhythm and cadence tends to touch the souls of people. Take for example, the number Dispacito, despite it being a Spanish song is has become an international rage. Although many people of late aren’t able to interpret the song they sway with the rhythm of this catchy song. And it is sought after number each and every party, event, celebration universally. Indeed, that’s what makes music establish harmony and unity among people of various nations.
Secondly, Music can make the society bind beyond ages. Of late old so many old so many old tunes and ever green song of yesteryears songs have been remixed to help establish a connect with the youngsters and the youth currently seem to be humming and enjoying the old songs as they come with a lot of soulful music. Take for illustration of late, many old people in the UK are also enrolling for contemporary music classes like Rock, Jazz, Hip-Hop and even techno. For it comes with a sea of benefits, like it keeps them happier, moreover it keeps them off chronic diseases like Alzheimer, Dementia Depression etc.
To sum up, Music can influence the world to come under one roof. Music can end of a lot of animosity between people of different faiths as music can play the role of an antidote in today’s world
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...veryone on to the dance floors or it is a euphonious song pleasant to the ears. R...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...he language may not understood by many. Still music which is built on rhythm and cade...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ngs have been remixed to help establish a connect with the youngsters and the youth curre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, for example, kind of, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70621468927 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4981847283 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1191803809 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246065071578 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077592431859 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723114891228 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156702091027 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765182147225 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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