Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
For the past few decades, in most countries one of the biggest challenging problem is rising in population growth. Indeed, Substantial increase in population is also causing environmental and education problems in growing countries. In this essay, I am trying to explain some of the problems result in overpopulation and recommend possible remedies to solve this issue.
To begin with, in my country as an under development country, in the overcrowded cities, the governments cannot provide the basic necessities of life for people, hence, The economic and social prosperity of the people comes down. In fact, in this situation, underprivileged regions will be facing considerable problems. Another repercussion worth mentioning is that the education system in the country may suffer. It is highly likely that general discomfort of society is rising and this can pose a threat to the stability of the political system of the country. Finally, the overpopulation can directly overshadow the environment. For example, such expansion of population in India would do grave harm to the surrounding and caused air pollution. All these issues are self-triggered that we have a
There are few remedies to over this acute problem. One of them is raise public awareness about controlling birth rate. For instance, family health workers profound impact in rural areas by educating families about the issues caused by overpopulation. The governments should impose hefty fines on families who have more than 2 children. Therefore, the rules of governments not only is important but also very essential for society.
To conclude, overpopulation causes problem in health, education and other public services domain and place a huge burden on the government. If the problem perpetuated to grow without having proper control of it, many more people will die due to starvation in poor countries and life in growing countries will become increasingly difficult.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: necessities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42763157895 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09272110329 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6541322734 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251024764967 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719150498743 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547221814955 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144065259701 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481978506839 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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