The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which
do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet
and give the solution?
There are many problems nowadays. Some are major, whereas others are minor. Among the major problems, I feel global warming the main issue, which needs to focus more, since it has such gravity that it can create problem to inhabitants. In the course of the essay, I shall explain the reason, why it is so dangerous and the solution.
To begin with, global warming can cause huge damage to the environment. It can swallow coastal regions. Due to global warming, the glaciers are melting, sea levels are increasing, which is swallowing the regions which are on the coast of the sea. For instance, Sunderban had a nice sea sore, which has completely swallowed by the sea. Water has reached the village. Hence, I feel, if this issue is not tackled timely, it could create serious problem to the habitat.
On the other hand, "Every problem has a solution" global warming can be reduced by decreasing the use of fossil fuel, which are used in our cars. We can manufacture a number of cars which can run on battery. For instance, Sikkim, a place in the northeastern part of India, has put a complete ban on the cars run on fossil fuel. Today, the car is awarded as a zero-emission state by the UN. Hence, I believe the solution is achievable.
In conclusion, looking at the problem which global warming can create, it is better to work proactively on the solution to decrease the damage to habitat.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., I believe the solution is achievable. In conclusion, looking at the problem wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, whereas, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73577235772 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66633512216 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7164750801 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8125 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884664250436 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289410453992 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374020972187 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568771774047 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283513811514 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 12.6369458128 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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