You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this.
Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter
Explain how you learnt about these plans
Say what you think of the park
Give our opinion on the plans
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to inform you that last week we heard from some neighbors that new apartments are going to be build in the public park next to our homes. Some people brought important details regarding these plans and its impact on our lives.
This park has been more than 40 years and many generations past and spent their times in it. It is the only green area in this city where we can have fresh air and moments of silent, even families spend their times during weekends playing with their kids or having lunch. It is a place where most of the local people gather and meet for fun.
Moreover, this plan should not be initiated, it is a dangerous work against us the local citizens and environment, it will cause pollution in several sectors, like increase in noise during construction, air and water pollution even animals will migrate especially crow birds and other rare animals which are characteristic of this park.
Therefore, I would like from your side to talk about this serious environmental disaster on the first page of the local newspaper.
Regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir, Im writing to inform you that last week we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80748663102 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43551040728 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2341246473 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191446256043 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744019337714 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572989083731 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107524420456 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576035580266 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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