You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this.
Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter
Explain how you learnt about these plans
Say what you think of the park
Give our opinion on the plans
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Harry Martin, retired Army Officer living in Warwick colony. This morning, I read in your newspaper about the plans of replacing public park in our colony with new apartments. I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the same.
This park is one of the valuable asset of our society. It is the only park within the twenty miles therefore, it is the recreation place not only for local people but also for many others neighboring colonies. It has become the best-loved place for people of all age group. While children love to play with their friends and enjoy slides, see saws and other swings. Elderly people spent many hours reading newspaper and chatting with their friends seating beneath the shady trees or on the wooden benches. In short this park is a boon for localites.
As like many other people of our society, I believe that this plan of replacement would not be rational. People are more in need of public parks than apartments as there are plenty of other societies and apartments which are vacant from last many years.
I hope, through the power of your pen, you will bring our issues to the concerned authorities and they may reconsider this plan of constructing new apartments in place of park.
Your sincerely
Harry Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Harry Martin, retired Army Officer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79464285714 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38752070191 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.907004501 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6153846154 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224664193478 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786025393299 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08508667915 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144563803424 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917453735379 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.