The Graphs bellow show results of a survey of college going boys and girls activities other than academic studies.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
The graph compare non academic activities of college go...
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Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...he graph compare non academic activities of college going boys and girls. it i...
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Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...pare non academic activities of college going boys and girls. it is clearly vi...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
...es of college going boys and girls. it is clearly visible From the chart that ...
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Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...g the internet and 15% of their planning games on computers .Nearly 40% time is i...
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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...5% of their planning games on computers .Nearly 40% time is invested in outdoor g...
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Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Nearly
... of their planning games on computers .Nearly 40% time is invested in outdoor games l...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nvested in outdoor games like basketball 20% , football 13% and baseball 7% .last...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...ed in outdoor games like basketball 20% , football 13% and baseball 7% .lastly , ...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ball 20% , football 13% and baseball 7% .lastly , they spend 8 % of their time li...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...% , football 13% and baseball 7% .lastly , they spend 8 % of their time listening ...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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..., they spend 8 % of their time listening to music and devoted only 3 % to reading...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ed only 3 % to reading. On the other hand, girls show a good variety in their...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...how a good variety in their non academic activities. Their most popular activity ...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... activities. Their most popular activity is dancing that accounts for one fourth ...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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...t accounts for one fourth of their time.This is followed by internet and computer ga...
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Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Nearly
... cumulatively occupy 30 % of their time.Nearly one fifth of their time is allocated fo...
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Line 4, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...h of their time is allocated for reading and remaining time is dedicated to spor...
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Line 4, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... is allocated for reading and remaining time is dedicated to sports , listening ...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d remaining time is dedicated to sports , listening to music and gym and aerobic...
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Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... time is dedicated to sports , listening to music and gym and aerobics in that or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87333333333 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49815020322 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.450222093 43.030603864 301% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.2 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 22.9334400587 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107768073672 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103946058824 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970984242481 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103732119092 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979882252605 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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