The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea

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The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network, and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparisons where relevant

The table and chart provide information regarding a comparison of journey times in the city center before and after restorations of transportation lines and the cost of using different form of transportation.

In general, before improvement of transportation network, the fastest way of getting around the town is by using taxi. After the transportation network has changed, the most quick way to get from one place to another is still by using taxi although the journey time has got slower from nine minutes to 12 minutes. Even though, using taxi is the fastest way for getting around the town it cost the most too.

According to the table we can see that tram is the transport which has the highest increased in travel times after development of transportation network, from average time 22 minutes to 16 minutes. While, the cars decreased from 10 minutes to 15 minutes.

The way of getting around the city cost cheapest by bus, it takes under € 0.40 average cost per kilometer. However, Taxi, the form of transport that can carry people directly to the places that they want, cost the most expensive, almost €180 average cost per kilometer.

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Sentence: Even though, using taxi is the fastest way for getting around the town it cost the most too.
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