ue to the change in the lifestyle, people are evolving themselves from two wheelers to the automobiles. Some are of the opinion that it has more benefits and is making their life convenient. I partially accord with this notion.
To embark on, there are umpteen factors why purchasing the cars is beneficial. Firstly, the travelling to different places becomes easier when individuals have their own vehicles instead of utilizing the public transport. It helps in managing their time and is more comfortable. For example, When going for any vacation with family, especially the kids, as, taking stops in between the journey becomes easier, which is very cumbersome on the bus. Another reason is that, in the current scenario, there are a plethora of fuel efficient cars available which becomes economical when commuting on the daily basis, rather, spending money on using a taxi service. Sometimes, taxis are not available in the case of any emergency and the cost also becomes double when one has to hire a cab service regularly. For example, the cab service providers such as Uber always surge their prices during the peak hours which are generally the office hours and users have to pay more than the standard amount.
However, owning a four wheeler provides myriad advantages, there are also multifarious harmful effects on our atmosphere. Currently, almost every household is having at-least one car and as a result, the traffic is increasing day by day, which is the main source of pollution. The humans do not clean the smoke filters of their vehicles and let the poisonous gases emitted into the sky. For example, In cities such as Delhi, Mumbai, the quality of air is deteriorating due to dangerous smoke transmitting from the vehicles.
To conclude, although there are some negatives of the cars, the positives outshine them. As, they are not only the cause of environmental problems, still, it is the duty of human beings to buy more energy saving cars in place of fuel cars. In this way, the natural resources can also be saved from depleting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... the vehicles. To conclude, although their are some negatives of the cars, the pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, as to, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00874635569 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64010548888 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597667638484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1813785327 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.058823529 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127660686065 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366636893921 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380776879156 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722625119612 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176234126855 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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