Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say
– Why are you moving to another house?
– Describe your present accommodation.
– Explain why it will suit your colleague.
Dear Sam,
Hope this email finds you well, I'm just writing to let you know that I am aware of your next plan about travel to Paris but unfortunately, I have to leave Paris to Nancy. As you know, the 12th international gas congress will take pace in Nancy in July 2019 and I have been selected as company's candidate since 2 month ago whereby I have to departure my town when you arrive. Regarding to my house is located in the city center and the high expenses of accommodation in Paris I strongly suggest you to residence in my location. Although it is not a speciose apartment, you will feel more convenient and comfortable than hotels. It consists of two bedrooms and a bathroom that is equipped with hot water and a tiny dining room. Since you are not familiar with this city, you need to stay in a location where metro and bus stations are in availability just like my apartment. If you are going to shop, a central shopping center is established nearby me, recently. It should be emphasized that cost of hotels has dramatically developed particularly during high seasons, staying in my apartment leads to save lots of money.
Enjoy your stay and keep in touch
Best regards
Somi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...r Sam, Hope this email finds you well, Im just writing to let you know that I am ...
^^
Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... selected as companys candidate since 2 month ago whereby I have to departure my town...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59154929577 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68435415605 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657276995305 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0871423649 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161166301219 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602072765178 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439863109246 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141846445611 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00430284105486 0.0580467560999 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.