Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs
Due to the reduced time alloted to the weather and local news it can be seen from the memorandum that there is a significant decrease in the overall revenue generated.This decrease can be attributed to mainly two reasons.
The first reason is that the total viewership has reduced as there is more significance given to the national news rather than the weather and the local news. This means that a substantial amount of viewers are from the local area, and also inferring from the complaints received a good portion of the viewers are interested in knowing about the weather as well. Thus from this it can be reasoned that the viewers are either equally interested in the weather, local and the national news or more interested in the weather and local news.This maybe be the reason for the decreased amount of viewership.
The second reason is that there is a reduction of the the number of advertisement contracts the local businesses have with the tv station.This is because that the market area of these businesses is confined to the local area and the potential customers are the local people.So such businesses will be more interested in advertising their products on the local network rather than the national network.But since the station has reduced the total time allotted for local news the,amount of time and the viewership of these advertisements has also reduced. This is the main reason why the number of contracts with local businesses have reduced.
So to summarise the reduction in the alloted time for the local news has caused the local viewership to go down as well as the local businesses advertisements contracts to reduce as well. The two explained reasons above which is inferred from the memorandum strengthens the argument significantly.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 301 350
No. of Characters: 1453 1500
No. of Different Words: 113 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.165 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.827 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.686 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.67 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.473 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.692 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...crease in the overall revenue generated.This decrease can be attributed to mainly tw...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...d in knowing about the weather as well. Thus from this it can be reasoned that the v...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: This
...nterested in the weather and local news.This maybe be the reason for the decreased a...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... reason is that there is a reduction of the the number of advertisement contracts the l...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... reason is that there is a reduction of the the number of advertisement contracts the l...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: This
...cal businesses have with the tv station.This is because that the market area of thes...
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Suggestion: So
...otential customers are the local people.So such businesses will be more interested...
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Suggestion: But
...etwork rather than the national network.But since the station has reduced the total...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
... the total time allotted for local news the,amount of time and the viewership of the...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , amount
...e total time allotted for local news the,amount of time and the viewership of these adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 55.5748502994 63% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 295.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02033898305 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85222361432 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410169491525 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.297819642 57.8364921388 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.125 119.503703932 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.875 23.324526521 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.70786347227 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262916911883 0.218282227539 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136359096774 0.0743258471296 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582230347923 0.0701772020484 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170906237362 0.128457276422 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608341543664 0.0628817314937 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 14.3799401198 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.3550499002 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.197005988 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 98.500998004 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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