On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of the Insurance company
Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to raise an insurance claim against a valuable item which I have lost while holidaying in London. Let me explain the incident in detail.
To elucidate I have lost my expensive iPhone X which was custom designed by the manufacturer on a special request. The cell phone had a unique design with gold plated metal body and my name engraved on the flip side. Although I can't remember when exactly I lost the phone however I believe I may have lost the phone in the lodge where I was staying. For your information, I have registered a complaint with the lost and found the department of the hotel, however, I was told that they have not found any such item.
Since my phone was covered with Apple care insurance which provides comprehensive coverage to the phone against theft, therefore, I would request you to provide a free replacement of my phone. Lastly, my stolen phones IMEA number is 4567DRBHBCB7, the IMEA number may help you to investigate the case in detail.
Looking forward to receiving a free replacement of the phone as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to raise an insurance claim...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e engraved on the flip side. Although I cant remember when exactly I lost the phone ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e as soon as possible. Yours sincerely Saud
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, look, may, so, therefore, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73575129534 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69362287214 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611398963731 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1468208534 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207685283642 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682815460478 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649043142589 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10983006618 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678863847918 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.