Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is often said that modern society exists a lot of opportunities for us to make a choice. I completely agree with this statement.
Firstly, the technology environment changing should be the main factor. Before, there were not many methods for citizens to interact with others, in general, they could only used telephone or paper letter to communicate with their families or friends if who want to talk with someone. The developing techniques did not allow them to send a message or e-mail to anyone, so we can know that there are just a few choices for them. but, nowadays, we can communicate with each one easily. For instance, not only message on facebook but also facetime through your electronic device. you no need to worry about it is difficult to find someone, as hundred of possibilities are waiting for you to open.
Secondly, the convenience of browsing information would be one of the reason. In the past, citizens could just get the news from advertisement like television or newspaper, the ways of getting informations were less than us, the persons who live in current world. For example, someone who want to update some information that what discount of starbucks can be used. they can browse the official website of starbucks or deliver a question on the internet. The level of convenient is difficult to imagine. And even we need to confuse that there is a lot of choices, while I would name it is a trouble of happiness.
In conclusion, we have a lot of countless choices in the present society, and the advancing technology environment and the convening to view information would be the critical factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: You
...acetime through your electronic device. you no need to worry about it is difficult ...
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...what discount of starbucks can be used. they can browse the official website of star...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88129496403 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84346772998 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3814780781 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992332247678 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305744935459 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323446725213 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552459913052 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125955925996 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.