As for the development by the time, the interaction among countries become more frequently as well as make more similarly for each country. I strongly believe that it is a positive trend on the earth.
There are several reasons why I believe that the trend is positive. The circumstance proves a well technology development as far as the citizens could obtain the foreign goods at the home easily. Before, traveling is the only way to buy the foreign goods as long as we aim to get somethings, which is inconvenient. But we can be shopping on the online shopping center now to browse the foreign stuffs as well as waiting the products arrive to the home via the quickly international transport system. The convenience of buying the foreign goods proves that the technics is improving sustainable.
On the other hand, the similarity of each country accelerates the communication of each other. It is not rarely seen on the modern society that the culture mixing food is discovered. For instance, a new invention “Pizza Bun” is invented between Italy and China, which represent that a new culture would be created as soon as some countries are mixed. Likewise, we may appreciate and observe a stimulation as far as the birth of culture mixing. It is an effective way to bring a variety of creativity to the world via the cooperation between the amount of countries.
In conclusion, the similarity among the countries may bring a new impact or even change the world positively. Hence, I completely believe that this is a positive development.
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 56
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matters (such as food, cloths and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is importa 67
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- THE CHART BELOWSHOWS THE PERCENTGE OF HOUSEHOLDS IN OWNED AND RENTED ACCOMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ing food is discovered. For instance, a new invention 'Pizza Bun' is invented betwe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, likewise, may, similarly, so, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93511450382 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96327038736 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538167938931 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9434896642 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174882215329 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521443218316 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060363209099 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120641281334 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793314662192 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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