Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet. How accurate is this statement? Are there any other big threats to mankind?
Increase in global temperature has huge threat for surviving on Earth. This essay will argue that it is correct to say that changes in Environmental conditions are becoming cause of extinction in biodiversity, however, extremism is the most prominent cause of instant loss of humanity.
Most of the creatures live on the earth according to their suitable climate conditions. However, changes in these have devastated effect to their habitat, and they are on the level of extinction. This is because they are not able to grasp changes in their surroundings and lost their lives. In addition, they are also connected through food chain, therefore, extinction of one species become the cause of others extinction which is the major threat to ecosystem. For example, in 2018, the UN reported that 30% of wildlife have vanished due to changes in level of temperature on earth.
Other biggest threat to mankind is the terrorism who uses nuclear explosion to harm people. This is to say that many terrorist attacks are increasing at present because they want to create violence among nations which effect social life and many people lost their lives through these devastating attacks. Consequently, it has been becoming other major danger among nations. For instance, BBC news reported that a month ago, in Sri Lanka, terrorist attacked seven public places by suicide bombs and many innocent people lost their lives.
In conclusion, not only atmospheric changes have been ruining the planet since past few years, but terrorism also playing a vital role to vanish the life of people as well as species.
- Government give a lot of support to artists even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both the views and give your opinion 73
- In many countries smoke is now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Your local college is organizing an event on the International Student’s Day and is looking for people to talk about their country. Write a letter and say- What topics would you like them to cover?- Why would it be interesting for students?- Ask questio 73
- More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause > What do you think are the possible solutions ? 64
- Many children these days have their own mobile phones. What are advantages and disadvantages? Give your own opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15325670498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65904799725 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8362807308 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182698006692 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067209166384 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527068276898 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103096260613 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147366479769 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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