Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
gender equality has always sparked heated controversy. Some commentators are of the view that the traditional approach always confined the men as the breadwinner for their family and the women considered to be taken care for house chores and upbringing of their children, hence both should be given equal opportunities to get educated in renowned universities; other people oppose this idea. this essay will argue on both sides and I shall hold the opposite opinion.
To begin with, there are many arguments to support the idea that men and women should be allocated with the same number of admissions in educational institutions. The major concern is, in our anti-feminist society men has always given the precedence over the women rights, which leads to gender discrimination and imbalanced education in both sexes. If the candid opportunities have not been given to both the candidates, then we are demolishing the virtuous of female students. To illustrate, a recent survey from a sociological organization has revealed that 2 out of each 10 females have abandoned their advanced studies because of family pressure.
On the other hand, apart from the concerns expressed above, I strongly believe that the admission process should be based on a fair chance of grade system and the area of interest of the candidates. educational bodies should aim for the talent hunt, applicants must be shortlisted on the basis of their rank achieved in their entrance exams. For instance, most of the universities announce the cut-off rate of high ranked students to get admissions in their institution. Furthermore, course suitability should be based upon the field of interest, despite the sex factor. In particular, male nominees for fashion designing course are surging in the last few years, which is the true opposition of the conservative thought.
To recapitulate, our society has always been biased for the male contender, however, by applying the stringent laws these situations can be curbed. Nonetheless, recognizing the right talent and deserving candidates is more cautious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, apart from, for instance, in particular, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33939393939 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99556452029 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3861615774 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0945180825097 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321832635586 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207553024145 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521973881905 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186821633203 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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