Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the people to take care about the environment .Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment .Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is undeniable fact that for survival on planet earth ,healthy and pure environment is utmost important.It is often contented by some people that individuals should maintain and protect the environment whereas opponents believe that it is prior task of government to make the surroundings clean.This essay will discuss both views and state my own position that making the place vigorous for living is the primary duty of authorities.
Firstly,the consumption of natural resources is done by humans in large extent so it is obvious that public intervention is quite essential in making adobe fresh and pollution free.Furthermore,it is the responsibility of public to condemn the usage of non-biodegradable resources such as plastic bags and chemical products.Additionally,introduction of government polices related to environment protection need a strong support from citizens for its successful handling.Also,by utilising the immense potential and the attribute of togetherness individuals can make a huge change in the betterment of world.For instance, The Chhipko movement serves the best example for people's revolt against the mindless deforestation.
Secondly,government is the basic structural building block of every country,hence to make the surrounding better for living is one of the salient responsibility of governs.Adding to it,to protect the environment from reckless destruction government can make various strict laws for the protection of wildlife,ecosystem and natural resources.Not only building environmental laws but also ensuring its proper enforcement should also be taken care by officials. Moreover,high penalties can be charged to person not abiding the laws ,which might generate the kind of fear among the society.For example,recently the use of plastic bags is prohibited in California and the companies manufacturing the bags being closed by them,hence high authorities have full power to make this planet better place to live.
Finally,according to my strong notion taking care of the environment is the core responsibility of the ruling government.The authorities have the potential to make firm rules on wildlife protection,deforestation,depletion of natural resources and high rising pollution,to curb the threat of deterioration of our earth.Inevitably,governs can generate awareness among the society through advertisements related to environment protection.Stating the fact,Finland has become the world's most eco friendly country just because of the active measure taken by their authorities for the prevention and control of pollution and waste.
In conclusion,it can be stated that to make change in the world there is need to make change in oneself,therefore without the active participation of individuals the task to take better care of the environment can not be achieved.Certainly, government responsibilities are higher and they have enough power to allocate their resources to provide green environment for public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 8.3376753507 420% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2536.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8976744186 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.23103473735 2.80592935109 151% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537209302326 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 793.8 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.433895362 49.4020404114 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 422.666666667 106.682146367 396% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.6666666667 20.7667163134 345% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.3333333333 7.06120827912 401% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210314787708 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113477922857 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707207542685 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1299741207 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591372635186 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.2 13.0946893788 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.51 50.2224549098 -35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.12 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.64 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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