modern technology allow machine to perform the hard work instead of human? does this have positive or negative effect on people give your opinion with example
With the proliferation of science and technology,life has become more convenient and easy resulting in negligible human intervene in physical work.It has to be admitted that the advancement of technology has both merits and demerits.However,I strongly opine that detrimental effects of digital age on people far outweigh its advantages.
To begin with,the innovation of technological devices has serious effects on people working in different professional sectors.The replacement of human labour with emerging digital devices has lead to massive surge in unemployment.For instance,a survey conducted in United States concluded that 40% of people lost their jobs as they were replaced by innovative technologies .Moreover,machines are being used for every single task which has enhanced its dependency and in case of its malfunctioning huge wastage of time and money occurs.
In addition to this,the excessive usage of machines has adverse effects on the human health.people are becoming more lethargic and inactive by following the exaggerated use of technological devices for performing their everyday chores.Moreover,most of the physical hard work in industrial sector is now performed by hardware technologies making the human inactive and increases their vulnerability to diseases.In recent study done by university of California,it is found that people using scientific equipments for all daily tasks are prone to serious health issues such as obesity,hypermetropia and muscular problems.
In conclusion,taking into consideration the detrimental effects of outrageous usage of machines for physical work,there is need to minimize the dependency on these technologies.The technology should be utilised in proper manner taking in mind its adverse effects on human health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.015625 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7230476742 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.83871038 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 385.0 106.682146367 361% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.7667163134 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.5 7.06120827912 333% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232221480994 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144907209025 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247693350668 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144907209025 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247693350668 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.9 13.0946893788 297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.86 50.2224549098 -38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.52 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.81 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.