Process : the Process of Pu-erh Raw Tea and Ripe Tea
The diagram presents the manufacturing process of two types of tea, Pu-erh raw tea and Pu-erh ripe tea. Although the first three stages are the same for both teas, it can be seen that the methods of production differ in the final stages, which accounts for the resulting variations in the two teas.
To begin with, firstly, the tea leaves that have been picked are pan fried in order to inactivate the enzymes. Following this, the tea is rolled and afterwards spread out on a round mat, so that it can dry under the sun. once it has been dried, the loose raw tea is ready to be turned into either ripe tea or raw tea. This is where the process diverges.
In accordance with the next step, to make Pu-erh ripe tea, the loose tea is fermented by being left to mold. Having completed the fermentation stage, the resulting loose ripe tea is then compressed, after which the tea is ready for sale. Regarding the alternative process, before being ready for sale as vintage raw tea, the loose tea is first compressed and then left to age by storage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
... mat, so that it can dry under the sun. once it has been dried, the loose raw tea is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52105263158 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3299150532 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.249223595 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565363669213 0.215688989381 262% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256275571686 0.103423049105 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207427684027 0.0843802449381 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.415983079225 0.15604864568 267% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258236111328 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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