Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events cause antisocial behavior, can team sports really be good for us?
Team sports are generally gives the great way to keep fit and build our character. However, sports events matches are accompanied by violence and antisocial behavior. If the events cause some unnatural behaviors it's not good for sports people who really interested in the activities. My inclination falls under this view.
Firstly, Sports is good for human health. It will keep the body more active throughout the day. Secondly, If a person has an activate in the sports will not undergone any kind of diseases. They were more healthy when compared to normal people. Thirdly, many sports events are now a days. People can join in any kind of sports activities and proof their mental and strong advisability in sports. For Instance, Team sports were conducted in the Olympics where there are many countries participated from the world wide. it will be more attractive for the tourists and the people who lived in their cities and economy costs will be increased due to the Olympic games.
On the flip side, team sports are very bad in behind the games there will be a gambling threatened will be there. Moreover, games will be need to conduct in a good manner other wise violence will be happened in the area and cause more damaged for the rival supporters.
In the nutshell, sports games are usually make the sports person healthy and fit. This is how the sporting events are happened violence between the rival supporters and antisocial behaviors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hout the day. Secondly, If a person has an activate in the sports will not undergone any ki...
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Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...people. Thirdly, many sports events are now a days. People can join in any kind of sports ...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...le. Thirdly, many sports events are now a days. People can join in any kind of sports ...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...re many countries participated from the world wide. it will be more attractive for the tou...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...re many countries participated from the world wide. it will be more attractive for the tou...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...tries participated from the world wide. it will be more attractive for the tourist...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
... the nutshell, sports games are usually make the sports person healthy and fit. This...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...hell, sports games are usually make the sports person healthy and fit. This is how the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48437512666 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5789175636 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397933317373 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15312127526 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150076389391 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289618403768 0.151781067708 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173951529152 0.0609392437508 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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