Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
In the modern era, Alcoholic is legal process which is under government undertaken. It is one of the beverages used to consume lot of people like male from the age of 18. When they consume this, it will cause many of the problems. My inclination falls under this view.
Firstly, Alcohol is good to health when it consume in a limit. Secondly, it was legal one. Most of the country's government allowed to sell the liquor in shops. Thirdly, alcoholic beverages most often used for the beauty cosmetics as well. For instance, In India government banned the liquor items to sell in shops, as a result government loss in theor finnancial problems. To overcome, this problems again they given the permissions to run.
On the flip side, Due to consume of beverages people commit a lot of issues, like they are not in control, behavior of drunken. In many places they advertise to not to drink to spoil their health and their family too. While drink don't drive any vehicle due to this lot of accidents.
In Conclusion, Many rules came for the liquor shops to not to sell. But people are enjoying while drinking, Not only in small shops, Liquor are selling in many big hotels. This is how the most alcohol shops run in legal manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consumes'?
Suggestion: consumes
...stly, Alcohol is good to health when it consume in a limit. Secondly, it was legal one....
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'selling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: selling
...Most of the countrys government allowed to sell the liquor in shops. Thirdly, alcoholic...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...theor finnancial problems. To overcome, this problems again they given the permissio...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'gave'?
Suggestion: gave
.... To overcome, this problems again they given the permissions to run. On the flip ...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...poil their health and their family too. While drink dont drive any vehicle due to thi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ealth and their family too. While drink dont drive any vehicle due to this lot of ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65596330275 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41010850617 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5129940892 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4375 104.977214359 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212184027802 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745373532395 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746329526812 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131930679433 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981742895005 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 12.6369458128 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.1260098522 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.9458128079 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.5310837438 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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