29.10.2017
You have lost your credit card.
Write a letter to the manager of your bank. In the letter
explain how you lost the card
ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement
Date: October 29, 2017
To,
HSBC bank Manager,
Ontario branch
I am writing this letter with respect to inform you that, I have a saving bank account with your bank. while opening of my saving bank account, the relationship manager has also issued me your bank credit card as a Complimentary gift for taking a new account in your branch. Today I was travelling from old Ontario to new Ontario for some personal work . I have taken public transport services for travelling purpose. while travelling from one place to another, when i took morning 8.06 am train from old Ontario station, I remembered that my bag was pack and my wallet was inside the bag. when i took the train, It was already crowded and there was no place to take in any of the passenger. I was lucky to take this train but after sometime I realised that some one has stolen my wallet by taking advantage of train rush. There were few dollars and my first credit card was kept. As all the cards are sensitiv and to avoid mis-use of my credit card by any of the person, I request you to stop my old credit card and issue me a new credit card.
my card details are as follows:
my old credit card number is 1234 5678 9002
bank name - HSBC bank
Thanking you,
Your sincerely,
Paful Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...e a saving bank account with your bank. while opening of my saving bank account, the ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...io to new Ontario for some personal work . I have taken public transport services ...
^^
Line 7, column 419, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...nsport services for travelling purpose. while travelling from one place to another, w...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 468, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...velling from one place to another, when i took morning 8.06 am train from old Ont...
^
Line 7, column 491, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'trained'.
Suggestion: trained
...to another, when i took morning 8.06 am train from old Ontario station, I remembered ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 591, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... pack and my wallet was inside the bag. when i took the train, It was already crowde...
^^^^
Line 7, column 596, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and my wallet was inside the bag. when i took the train, It was already crowded ...
^
Line 7, column 759, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...rain but after sometime I realised that some one has stolen my wallet by taking advantag...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 911, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... was kept. As all the cards are sensitiv and to avoid mis-use of my credit card b...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...t card and issue me a new credit card. my card details are as follows: my old cr...
^^
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'name' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'names'.
Suggestion: names
...dit card number is 1234 5678 9002 bank name - HSBC bank Thanking you, Your s...
^^^^
Line 10, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is 1234 5678 9002 bank name - HSBC bank Thanking you, Your sincerely, Paful ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50431034483 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25979495559 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4976403869 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286898465899 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116953258224 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114435135411 0.0603063233224 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13305374212 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697270380742 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.