in twenty years will be a fewer cars than there are today. do you agree or disagree
Cars have been used for hundreds of years. At the beginning were invented with an old fashion machinery but nowadays cars are more sophisticated. Also, the industry of automobiles has a great competition between all brand of cars that exist today, so I do not believe that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. In the following essay, I will explain why I think so.
First of all, cars are the most important mean of transportation for many people. Not only in small towns people use cars to travel, but also in metropolitan areas have become in the principal way to move from one place to another. The Era of bus and train is already disadvantageous. The reason why people are using more their own transportation is because the industry of automobile every year grab the attention of the customers with the innovation of new devices for automobiles, such as reverse camera that make it easy parking, also GPS that helps them to find an address. Consequently, people get attracted for all of that and prefer has their own cars. For instance, I went to New York about ten weeks ago and there were many people driving their own cars on the highways. The metro bus station was completely empty. Also, I realized that there were many brands of automobiles such as Mercedes Benz, Ford, Toyota and others. Seems that people did not like to travel anymore in public transportation so I believe that the industry of transportation will increase in the future.
Second, cars have been used for many years and they have never become useless, instead dealers have increase the sales of them in the last twenty years. Dealers not only sale their cars but also, they give the opportunity to their costumer to lease the cars. This is a great chance because many people do not have money to buy a car, so they can lease for a period and then return it with the possibility to get a new one. My personal experience is an example of this. About three years ago I leased a car for two years. My lease ended and now the dealer gave the opportunity to get a better offer because I was eligible for. At this moment, I am driving a new car with cero miles and it is the car that I dreamt with. If the dealers and companies give all those opportunities to their costumer cars will never disappear.
In conclusion, for all that I mention above I do not believe that in twenty years will be a fewer cars. However, will be more people that will want to buy their cars. As a result, the industry would be forced to produce more new models to supply the sales.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50321199143 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53568093263 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462526766595 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5038715488 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4583333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243263273569 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742709086611 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103729534072 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199976886924 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11490006427 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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