You have a bicycle that you are no longer using. You would like to sell it to a friend.
write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain why you are no longer using your bicycle.
describe your bicycle.
explain why you think your friend would like to have it.
Dear John,
I hope you are well and sorry I haven,t written to you for ages. I want to let you know that I decided to sell my bicycle. As I remember you always liked to have a bike, so I thought you,d be interested to buy my bike.
As you know, I work as marketing manager and I have no more external time to riding and it,s my job demanding. On the other side, I have moving to a new apartment and my new place is enough far way from office, then I have to get to work by bus. The last reason is we have a big GYM with all kind of facilities in our office, and I try to get my regular exercise there.
Let me explain my bicycle,s features. It is a really nice ten-speed racing bicycle, so it,s lightweight and fast, in addition, it is very nice silver color with golden lines. I promise you,d like it if you see it.
As I remember, you always liked to riding your own bike, so when I decided to sell my bike, I prefer to tell you at the first. I can sell it to you at a special price.
Let me know if you are interested, and we,ll discuss the price.
Best wishes,
Mahsa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
... I hope you are well and sorry I haven,t written to you for ages. I want to let ...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , d
...s liked to have a bike, so I thought you,d be interested to buy my bike. As you...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...e no more external time to riding and it,s my job demanding. On the other side, I ...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...cise there. Let me explain my bicycle,s features. It is a really nice ten-speed...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
...lly nice ten-speed racing bicycle, so it,s lightweight and fast, in addition, it i...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , d
...r color with golden lines. I promise you,d like it if you see it. As I remember...
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Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l you at the first. I can sell it to you at a special price. Let me know if yo...
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Line 11, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ll
...et me know if you are interested, and we,ll discuss the price. Best wishes, Mah...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, then, well, in addition, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.00458715596 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25051780741 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9968933705 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326548402521 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124492299578 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865571159284 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183502574745 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080835264518 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.62 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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