Dear Sir or Madam
I recently saw your one-week walking tour which going to take in Dajti mountain, advertised on a brochure. I want to enroll
in this exciting experience, but before continuing with the registration i want to ask what is it required physically to
partecipate in such events as i am not sure if i can meet the criteria.
Can you please provide me with additional info for the event. I would need some information about the place that all partecipiants are will meet in order to start the journey and also the exact hour that the bus will start. Moreover i would like to know how much will this tour cost, if there are offers for new members or if you have included different membership fees.
I have been told by a friend of mine that there are some fitness level standard that should be meet in order to partecipate. I was thinking if this information is correct, because it is a while that i am not exercising and i am concerned that my fitness level is not at is best.
Looking forward for your reply,
Yours sincerely
Andi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54166666667 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6282841559 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6272493053 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152390204718 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645135641956 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570703971583 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602968906587 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565622534346 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.