You have recently ordered an item from the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter
• Describe what you purchased
• Explain why you are not happy with the purchase
• Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my concern over the poor quality of mobile phone that I purchased a couple of days through your website.
It is an MI phone with the latest features including a high quality front camera. There is also a finger print recognition available. Further, this is extremely light and stylish. The metallic blue back cover adds a professional look to the gadget.
However, the battery does not last even half a day. My friends have the same item purchased elsewhere. Some of them find the power last for even three days. It is all the more disappointing because I am not even able to read my office mails on the hand phone, when out of desk.
Under these circumstances, I request you to either give a full reimbursement against collection from my premise, or a replacement with a good quality one. I cannot spare time or money to come all the way to your outlet at the far end of the city.
I look forward to receive an amicable solution at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Sudhan Kumar C
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| 2019-05-13 | ATTENBOROUGH | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...far end of the city. I look forward to receive an amicable solution at the earliest. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65425531915 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63865710492 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686170212766 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.092496605 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3076923077 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147528447043 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397608352435 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433333350887 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646500752959 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310139700259 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.