Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
One of the conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that TV is an essential part of life. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. I agree with this and I will elucidate some reasons for the same in this essay.
There are innumerable explanations for my stance. More preponderant one is that television is the most influential invention in the history of mankind. And it acts as an unlimited source of entertainment, news, knowledge, and advertisements showing aspects of our lives. Channels feature content involving nature, science, culture and history along with other entertainment programs. With their cognitive learning programs, they broaden the horizon of people especially students. Research states that children learn better with visual effects and television can act as a good medium for such education. In addition, news channels keep you updated with current happenings and events across the globe. To cite an example on this matter, Syria civil war, live updates of the U.S. Presidential elections. Also, daily weather forecast alerts people to prepare for natural disasters.
On the other hand, some people adopt an opposite view and tend to believe that people are addicted to television. This is the undeniable fact that they become more obsessed with television by spending long hours in front of it. Thus, it is adversely affecting their productivity and thought process.
Agglomerating all the points above, I strongly agree that TV plays a vital role in everyone's life to spread news and awareness and to make a better individual; however, the usage should be limited to gain the benefits to the fullest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15658362989 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83618953427 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.191636544 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5625 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241775175657 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638401370486 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507377490396 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134299856733 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519736641843 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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