Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some believe that increased sports amenities are the optimum method to develop people's health, while others would argue that it has a minimum effect on their health and other activities such as yoga, determine the healthiness, I believe that sports are a better option to measures overall health.
On the one hand, recreational activity such as yoga is an efficient way to measure the health of an individual. That is to say that practising yoga poses such as Trikonasana and Adho Mukha Svanasana can rapidly increase flexibility and reduce blood pressure. This practices often results in measuring one's health by mastering these poses. For instance, India origin "Yoga" had awarded as world's best form of exercise to improve human health by the Ayurvedic sciences of India. However, these practices cannot be measured scientifically and fitness results seem to be fluctuating.
On the other hand, the health of an individual should be measured through their various sports activity because it is easier to track the results. In other words, playing more games such as a marathon, help people to check their fitness by running more kilometres workout getting exhausted. These practices result in calculating burnt calories, thereby fitness can be measured. For example, a recent report released by the World Health Organization, states that 90% of Americans, who participated in the Boston Marathon, are healthier than other people, who never participated in any sports.
To conclude, although traditional activity such as yoga can be treated as a method to analyse a healthiness, it is more appropriate to weigh them through their sporting habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36641221374 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9037148504 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5519080472 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11890417024 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443094255886 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331993745732 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732245708182 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439831743663 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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