Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued by some that increase in the sports facilities like gymnasiums, basketball courts and swimming pool within our society will lead to improvement in public health however there are others who believe that provision of such extracurricular sports facilities will have no effect on public health and other steps are necessary. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and will elucidate how measures like health education and implication of heavy taxes on processed foods can lead to improvement in public health.
Firstly as is evident in many countries that there are plenty of sports facilities available for people to work out and remains fit not only in their communities but also at their offices however it is often noticed even after following a rigorous workout schedule many people are not able to improve their health due to consumption of junk food thus affecting their health severely. In a recent survey done by London University on public health safety it was published that increase in sports facilities in United Kingdom has led to decline in public health as majority of people consumed processed foods and avoided healthier diets.
On the other hand, spreading awareness about the healthy diet is a much-needed thing and making people aware of the dangers of processed foods. Many people are unaware of the fact that how much harm they are doing by consuming junk food. For instance as per the recent survey done by Fortis hospital globally it was published that around 70 percent of people who suffered from obesity were due to lack of knowledge about healthy diet and consumption of junk food therefore awareness by conduction of public health sessions and implications of heavy fines by federal bodies on processed foods are mandatory for increase in public health standards. In a recent survey many governments in developed nations are taking public health initiatives by organizing health awareness camps which discuss on daily life eating habits and how such habits can improve health even without exercise. In countries like Singapore the government has banned many processed food items which contains certain preservatives which can have a severe impact on one’s health thus making our society healthier.
To conclude in my opinion instead of introducing an enormous number of health centres which may impact the public health, the authorities should create awareness among the masses and a complete ban on fast foods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21945137157 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64141459035 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511221945137 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.7576353576 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 209.3 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301018629859 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129693294541 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074246953967 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195089770546 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655832618399 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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