Dear Mr. Ren,
I am writing to you to inquire about renting an apartment for a small vacation. I have seen your contact detail which is provided on the website of your company. Actually, I am planning to spend my vacation in Singapore. I am looking for a small apartment with kitchen, tv, and fridge. If you do not mind then please do me your favor for this living area which consists balcony with sea view, Where I can spend my valuable time with my food.
Because I have a long weekend vacation at the end of the next June, I am planning to be there. In Singapore, I will enjoy my holiday for about 5 days and in between, you can arrange vegetarian food for me then It would be great for me.
During the Summer, the price of the all hotel and tourist company is been going to raise. Because of my small budget, I can not afford the large amount for accommodation hence If you can share your price information with me then I can book my holiday trip with you as soon as possible.
I would be grateful if you could arrange my trip with the desired accommodation. I am waiting for your valuable response with all required details.
Kind regards,
Nikunj
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- There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter• describe the complaints tha 89
- You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there.Write a letter to the tourist information office.In your letter:explain what you needsay when you plan to be thereask for information about pri 64
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41203703704 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45724325417 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3972435531 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253505821592 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089159357213 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069018565201 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170769359842 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279434104645 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.