You are staying in rented accommodation. You recently held a party to celebrate your birthday. Several neighbours have complained about the noise to your landlord.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:
apologize for the disturbance
explain the situation
say how you will remedy the situation
Dear Martin,
I am a tenant in your apartment.I am writing this letter to apologise for the noise disturbance that caused from my side, during a party last night to other residents.
I am extremely sorry for the difficulties that I made to my neighbours last night.A s i was conducting a birthday party of mine with my friends and it was the first time they visited my flat,i could not able to control my guests during that function.they were very excited to have such a party after a long time.S o they enjoyed it by playing music in loud sound.
it would be great if you could arrange a meeting of our residents,so that I could ask sorry to all of them for making such a problem.I promise you that ,there will not be any situation like this in future from my side.
I hope you would accept my sincere apologies and could arrange a situation for me to convey my sorry to my neighbours.
Yours faithfully,
Neenu varghese.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arty last night to other residents. I am extremely sorry for the difficulties...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...that I made to my neighbours last night.A s i was conducting a birthday party of ...
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Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...that I made to my neighbours last night.A s i was conducting a birthday party of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I made to my neighbours last night.A s i was conducting a birthday party of mine...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
... was the first time they visited my flat,i could not able to control my guests dur...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...was the first time they visited my flat,i could not able to control my guests dur...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... to have such a party after a long time.S o they enjoyed it by playing music in l...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...o all of them for making such a problem.I promise you that ,there will not be any...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...making such a problem.I promise you that ,there will not be any situation like thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52352941176 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63750563718 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.590875533 44.8134815571 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.8 76.5299724578 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.0 16.8248392259 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163386335261 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107088294575 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559304149672 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926899440858 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541140551073 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.