One of the most crucial problem is that nowadays people feel unsafety all time. In the following pharagraphs reasons of the problem will be given and viable solution will be outlined.
To start with, people do not feel safety even at their home, because of high crime rate. On account of rising number of population and areas of urban cities some people are suffering from homelesslines, unemployment, so they have to commit a crime to earn money. Owing to this, a lot of confusion will occur in society and people sense unsafety.
In addition to this, in our rapidly changing world many traffic accidents occur at streets because of traffic jam, high amount of cars. Cities are being more industrial and urban, so employment rate is rising very fast. It brings necessity for cars and because of this, amount of traffic jam and accidents are rising day bay day.
To solve this problem strickt rules might be produced by government. Also they should make these rules understandable for the people. For example, government might designate employees to make these rules comprehensible for other people.
Untying of the second dilemma is improving controls at streets. it might be recruit new workers who know rules of transports well and they may be authorized to make movements of transports regularly.
To conclude, there are some causes, such as, high crime rate, traffic jam which is associated with the issue of not feeling safe and also solutions can be carried out by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, second, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63351020503 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4384528941 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140583946865 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047892788135 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052057892211 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718131424908 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522795941932 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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