Many elderly people are no longer look after by their families but are put in care homes and nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
The trend of nursing homes taking care of elderly people is quite common to see these days. Although, these care homes give best medical care to them but unfortunately they could not take the place of a family. In this essay I will examine various advantages and disadvantages of nursing homes and care homes looking after elderly people and provide a logical conclusion.
There are numerous advantages of nursing homes such as in this busy lifestyle, family members hardly have any time to take care of elders. To overcome this problem, we have care-homes. these care-homes not only provide medical care but also provide personal attention which is required by people at this age of life. another significant benefit of nursing homes is that the nurses are well-educated in medical field as compared to family members, hence they could manage perfect diet chart and routine medical checkup which could not be possible at home.
however, we cannot over look the disadvantages of nursing homes. The main drawback of admitting elderly people to care-homes is that they miss their family and feel home-sickness which further negatively impact their health. another major negative impact of care homes is that the nurses and other staff members are not emotionally attached with their patients, thus they ill treat them most of the time. As an example, recently a daughter installed a spy camera in her mother's room to monitor the behavior of nurse and shocked to see that the nurse not only badly behaved but even beat her mother.
In conclusion, nursing homes are boom for the families where all the members are working and thus could not take care of elder members. it provides the benefits of proper medical and personal attention. however, it has some drawbacks as well like home-sickness felt by elderly people and they sometimes become victim of misbehavior and ill-treatment by the care home staff. To some extent, we can overcome these drawbacks by regular and routine visits to these care homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05705705706 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56740775366 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516516516517 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3412980834 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.266666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398358712863 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154844114957 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949356104389 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270111194406 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643949635676 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.