With an increasing population communication via the internet and text messaging face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extend do you agree?
In this modern world, we have got millions of ways to communicate with friends and family electronically. Telephones, text messages, emails, social networking sites are just a few examples. It has commonly believed by many that personal communications have been replaced by internet communication to a great extent and I totally agree with them.
To begin with, technology advancement was made for the benefit of humans but we had misused them and increased the communication gap between our families. Earlier, people loved to meet each other just to share some message or information but now we do all these things electronically, so there is no need left for meeting thus a gap has been immersed. For example, In India, families used to reunite during festive seasons, good times and hard times but now we all share our greetings and condolence online and do not find need to spend some quality time with families.
Although, communication via internet had relieved us from personal official meetings or need to navigate from one country to other but we had implemented this in our personal life as well. During our grandparent’s time, even in the absence of high-tech automatic cars or best public transport systems, people were curious to meet and know the wellbeing of others but unfortunately even though we are blessed with all the best amenities we do not trouble ourselves to visit someone personally, instead we do the needful communication via telephone. The coming generation would never realize the true value of family.
In conclusion, at one side, the technology advancement has benefited the people in many ways but it has a serious downside of increasing communication gap by demoting the need of personal meetings. I agree that face to face communications will soon become the things of past as we have become less socialized and even isolated ourselves due to these modern technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14057507987 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06016590032 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2822076674 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261349015842 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099405131298 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869485401963 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170615637237 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784867716613 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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