The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, there is a tremendous increase in the consumption of fast food and it is believed that it is a good way to keep pace with the busy lifestyle. In this essay, I will examine various advantages and disadvantages of this trend and provide a conclusion that states weather it is more advantageous or hazardous.
Lets start with advantages, there are few advantages of preferring fast food over nutritious food. They do not require much cooking time thus one could use his time for other productive activity. It is very essential for university students and hectic job employees to manage time appropriately thus convenience food saves a lot of preparation and cooking time. Also sometimes it is not possible to carry traditional food when you travel. this way convenience food is a best option during trips and vacations.
On the other side, there are some drawbacks of being dependent on convenience food. this habit has made us more lethargic. it is common to see that even though we are free or someone visit our house, we prefer to serve convenience food as it saves a lot of effort. Another significant disadvantage of loving convenience food is that it is not as healthy and nutritious as other freshly cooked food. Further these fast foods are coated with some harmful preservative in order to stay fresh for long time. Ready to eat food is really considered unhealthy and it is root cause of various chronic diseases such as diabetes, high cholesterol and many others.
In conclusion, Although convenience food helps us keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle but its routine consumption has several unavoidable disadvantages such as it badly effects our health, makes us more lethargic. In short its advantages do not outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, thus, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99324324324 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9381793854 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5504877881 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359432964312 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107265732435 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071031300365 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222505851579 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715712858969 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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