Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.Write a letter to the

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Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
-Explain why you are writing
-Describe your circumstances
Ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: &quot;Lucida Sans Unicode&quot;, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Dear sir, <o:p></o:p></span></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: &quot;Lucida Sans Unicode&quot;, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">I am </span><span class="hiddenspellerror">Harry</span> Martin, senior sales manager in city bank, Greenwich branch.
This morning, I read about the new animation course offered by your college. <span pre="writing " style="cursor: default;">&nbsp;I am writing you <span class="hiddensuggestion">regarding</span></span> the admission in same. <o:p></o:p></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: &quot;Lucida Sans Unicode&quot;, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Actually, I am
a computer </span><span class="hiddenspellerror"><span pre="computer " style="cursor: default;">savvy</span> since childhood but I had interest in </span><span class="hiddenspellerror"><span pre="in " style="cursor: default;">marketing too</span>
so I pursued MBA from Oxford University. Although, I do not have any formal
certification in computing but in my free time I always learn the computer tips
and tricks from </span><span class="hiddenspellerror">Youtube</span> channel. Also my
brother is a computer graduate so he has also made me learn many softwares such
as MS WORD, MS power point, photoshop etc .<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: &quot;Lucida Sans Unicode&quot;, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">This six month
course in animation offered by your college has risen my wish to learn computer
professionally. this course would definitely help me to make attractive
presentations in future </span><span class="hiddensuggestion">so as to</span> attract more <span class="hiddenspellerror">custormers</span>. With due respect, I wanted to ask you could guide me that
if by any sort, I could join this course leaving the <span class="hiddenspellerror">complusion</span> of elementary course. I would be really grateful to you. For
any <span class="hiddenspellerror">querry</span> or further information <span class="hiddensuggestion">regarding</span> my educational career details, you could contact me at
401-401-4011 or email me at harry.sandhu@abc.com I hope to get a positive
revert from you soon.<o:p></o:p></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: &quot;Lucida Sans Unicode&quot;, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">&nbsp;Yours Faithfully <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: &quot;Lucida Sans Unicode&quot;, sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Harry Martin.</span><o:p></o:p></p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 89, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...pellerror'>Youtube channel. Also my brother is a computer graduate so h...
^^^^
Line 14, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s MS WORD, MS power point, photoshop etc .

^^
Line 18, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...wish to learn computer professionally. this course would definitely help me to make...
^^^^
Line 19, column 73, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...span class='hiddensuggestion'>so as to attract more ^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, regarding, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3845.0 937.175257732 410% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 384.0 206.0 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.0130208333 4.54256449028 220% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.20388949086 2.54303337028 362% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 180.0 127.690721649 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.622605031667 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 976.5 290.88556701 336% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.5 1.41237113402 177% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 352.664656579 44.8134815571 787% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 384.5 76.5299724578 502% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.4 16.8248392259 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.29896907216 442% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0386784553178 0.216113520407 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552405610104 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054558692191 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386559660272 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492670088885 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.9 8.37731958763 536% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -43.23 70.7449484536 -61% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 3.82989690722 530% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 7.45979381443 385% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 41.37 8.71597938144 475% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 41.2886597938 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 8.62886597938 243% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 8.15463917526 258% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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