Some people think it is more effective for students to study in group while other believe that it is better for them to study on their own. Discus both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think it is more effective for students to study in group while other believe that it is better for them to study on their own. Discus both views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era, some students want to study alone and some students want to study in group. Every student can study better if once do study in good environment.

According to my perception, every student gain numerous benefits from study in group. Primarily, student get chance to share their ideas with other student due to this student perform better in study. Moving further, student enhance their knowledge from other students in group study. Apart from this, group study is more effective for holistic development of every student such as student enhance their confidence as well as fluency in language by communication with other students. Therefore, group study is better for every student.

No doubt, study on their own is better for student as student can concentration on study as well as student give best in study. However, student face lot of outcomes if onces study alone. Further, student do not judge ourselves in alone study due to this student do lot of mistakes in study. In addition, student become introvert in study on their. Beside that, study on their own is hurdle in student development as student do not feel compitent In study on their own. Henceforth, group study is better than study on their own.

IN the epilogue, study in group and study in own both have their own importance but in this comparative epoch group study is better for student development.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0641025641 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58818540238 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448717948718 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2808877554 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6428571429 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466260677894 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234832524495 0.084324248473 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108199802014 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.466260677894 0.151304729494 308% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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