You have just spent a week with a friend on a holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Thank you friend for the holiday.
- Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
- Give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear Jenny,
Hope this letter finds you well. I am writning to express my gratitude for welcoming me into your home last week.
You are quite aware that I have been having problems with my grades this past school year and how I am in dire need of a vacation. No words are enough of how thankful I am for you taking days off from work to spend time with me. The last 7 days was amazing and I can't wait for my next holiday with you.
On another note, I accidentally left my purse at the guest room, where I was staying. I placed it at the dresser when I was packing my luggage and forgot to pick it up before I left. Most of its contents are not that important, except for my school ID, which I badly need. I won't be able to enroll this semester if I do not have it with me.
If it's not too much to ask, can you please mail it to me this weekend? I am at 812 W. Fort Worth Apt. 6, East City 75451. You can also contact me for further details at 713-485-7492.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
Joyce Jabonero
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...h me. The last 7 days was amazing and I cant wait for my next holiday with you. ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g. I placed it at the dresser when I was packing my luggage and forgot to pick it...
^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ils at 713-485-7492. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Best regards, Joyc...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09223300971 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12772588857 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5662785716 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.6875 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264882094064 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768597565568 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065155978437 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154524038789 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638534538443 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 8.37731958763 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.55 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.15 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.