You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter> say where you think you left the papers>explain why they are so

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter

> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her

Dear Sir Manager,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to request for an assistance in retrieving the important documents that I left in your hotel.

On the 18th of May, we, from the J & R Co. had our quarterly meeting and utilized one of your function rooms at the 2nd floor. Just before the program ended, my manager requested for me to deliver a speech and make a toast. I remembered placing a black purse at the registration table near the entrance but forgot to pick it up before I left.

I have in that bag, a couple of signed contracts as well as some tickets for our company vacation this weekend. Apart from that, I also have my cellular phone in it. Your hotel is just a 30 minute drive from my house, and I would appreciate it if you can leave the purse at your reception desk, so that I can pick it up on Friday morning.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Joyce Smith

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, well, apart from, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38505747126 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41933706555 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2918431852 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242916558264 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833787851895 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672097161149 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157828250879 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618151652286 0.0580467560999 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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