Some people think robots can improve human life in future; while others think robots may affect society in a bad way. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion?
Trending technology has boomed to it is a maximum stage to help public in the form of robots. While there are clear benefits using machines for convenience, there exist some detrimental effects to both individuals in specific and society in general. Even though robots can be used in danger places like war prone areas, it may lead to adverse effects in sensitive fields like childcare, medical. I believe these coded designs should be used in some extend where we do not have safety and need to do error free works
One of the main advantages is man-made machines just can enter into unsafe places such as rescue missions, military areas where there is no proper food, water, air facilities .Also, humans tend to get bored soon it they given with the same routine where as these machines can work repeatedly, precisely without any limitation. Move over, it does not need instruction again and again as it has been coded with set of instructions onetime. For example, Artificial intelligences can work as slaves in research areas and wherever the task need to be done faster than humans.
Surprisingly, if these codings are given to wrong hand who use them to cause destruction might end up in serious threat to society. On the other hand, creators are losing jobs by replaced by these smart creatures which is economically threat to cow communities. Another serious concern is, it does need excess money to maintain as it uses power, unique chips to work properly as well as robots cannot be used where human sensitivity needed to take care of children and patients. Think Can robots feed children when they feel hunger?
To conclude, although machines have numerous areas to help future generation as we move into automatic world, there are serious threats in terms of specific areas where we cannot use them. Balanced handing would be better for safe society and for tension free human life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, in general, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91614906832 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50823457692 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624223602484 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.322916131 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.916666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126357565094 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050054226866 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539459271755 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734184854911 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031101230072 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.