The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over.
What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, the decrease in population size in most developed countries is one of the most serious concern which just can be ranked below the fear of the explosion in nuclear weapons. It is the reason why this trend make up the negative impact on remaining stabilize society. On coming up against this problem, the governments must bring out lots of solutions .
These countries will have to cope with more serious things if they carry on letting the decrease in the birth rate go further. First of all, it leads to the lacking of prospective labor intensive being the key factor of deciding socio-economic development. Namely, when ex-workers start to retire, the employers will have to find new trained human resources to fill in these spaces, nevertheless, with this population size, it is so difficult to gain sustainable balance. Secondly, the inhabitants degradation plays a role in the shortage of those who carry on family name. As a results, the best civilization contributing greatly to national cultural gradually disappear.
There are many new directions should be proposed to tackle this trend. In many countries, authority figures ought to mobilize necessary resources and talk to couples in child-bearing years about the great of importance when they start to have pregnancy. Moreover they also are able to hold the negotiation of child-bearing with the present of family plan experts in order to carry out population advocacy.
To sum up, because of the interrelationship between population and development, the government are making effort to check the population size.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25590551181 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03534478349 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8533513534 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154151033146 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470837004102 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654124461129 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814312162866 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462184369541 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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