It is undoubtedly the case that the falling birth rate and over age population in developed countries also affecting the mankind adversely. In this essay, i am going to examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the proactive measurs that government could implement to overcome this problem of the developed countries.
This could have the detrimental effects on the economy of that country. Firstly, the defense area of the country would be very weaker because of low rate of youth joined the military to protect the boundry lines of the country.Moreover, old people would not be allowed to do job in the defense areas because of their over age. Furthermore, Government could upgrade its technological advancements by providing more and more weapons to its soldiers and by renewing the nuclear power. By doing so the government would be capable for making its defensive system strong.
Apart from that , if the rate of population of youth is not stable and there are less youngsters in the developed contry, it can create threat to the productivity of the nation as if there would less labour in the country. In this case, government can promote immigration system and can import students from the developing countries and by doing this , the economy rate of population would be balanced. Although, the nation can gain higher quantity of labour and this would reduce the problem of less labouring available in the country.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worsewhile it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this This could probably solved by goverment as it can launch child policy and parents have to adapt this policy by hook or crook and by immrigration system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96949152542 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75641001 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1269287963 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155747500992 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755942525949 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888898028616 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10111554094 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055750906575 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.