The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?
It is undoubtedly the case that in developed nations the rate of birth will be estimated to begin to fall over the next fifty years as well as it is predicted that approximately 33 percent of population be aged 65 and over in the year of 2030 which is affecting the society adversely. In this essay, I will examine the possible reason for this problem and suggest some of the proactive measures that authorities can be use to overcome this issue.
This trend could have many negative outcomes. The first and foremost is, that it can be great effect on the economy of any nation. In this present era, Birth rate is the “burning question of the day”. If any country has people over the age of 65. Due to this, there productivity can be decrease because, youth is the backbone of the nation. People in that country cannot be fulfil the demand of that nation just because, of less production. To overcome this problem, the countries should be start the process of migration of youth from the other developing nations. The result of this process is that, it can be beneficial to fulfil their demand and also overcome the issue of age. The best epitome is that, there was a survey conducted by WHO ( World Health Organisation ) and they make a report. In the report they said that Switzerland was used the criteria of migration from developing countries and it was lead to increase in their economy level.
Moving further, the second effect of this issue is that it can be great impact on the defence area of that nation. It can happen just because of large number of old people in that country. They are not physically fit and fine. Due to this, they are not able to protect their nation from other countries but, no doubt; it can be solved with the help of technological advancement like they have protect their boundries with large amount of weapons which are control by modern gadgets. As a result of this, it can be useful to solve this probelm.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this. However, it could probably be solve by government to “take a bull on their horn” and making child policy as well as migrating youth from developing countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65594059406 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55075308293 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480198019802 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7024298781 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220596102111 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722314586702 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998663421025 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149602532805 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111281296626 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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